How do you find and fix the grammar and usage errors planted in a draft, and choose the correction that fixes the error without adding a new one?
Editing for grammar and usage: identifying and correcting errors in a draft passage, including subject-verb agreement, pronoun agreement and reference, verb tense, and modifier placement, and selecting the revision that fixes the error without introducing a new one, on a TNReady English I or II editing item.
How to edit a draft for grammar and usage on a TNReady English I or II item: finding and fixing subject-verb agreement, pronoun agreement and reference, verb tense, and modifier errors, and choosing the correction that does not introduce a new error. Editing fixes correctness.
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What this skill is asking
Editing is fixing the correctness of writing, grammar, usage, and (in the next dot point) punctuation and sentence boundaries, as opposed to revising, which improves effectiveness. TNReady English I and II editing items present a draft sentence with an error and ask which revision corrects it. The errors are the high-frequency ones: subject-verb agreement, pronoun agreement and reference, verb tense consistency, and modifier placement. The questions are multiple choice, and they share a subtle challenge: the wrong options often fix the original error but introduce a new one, so the skill includes choosing the revision that fixes the error cleanly. The transferable skill is proofreading with a checklist of the common errors and checking that your fix does not create a fresh problem, the same skill that protects the writing rubric's Conventions dimension.
The high-frequency errors and the clean-fix rule
Editing items reuse a short list of errors, so learn to scan for them.
The indefinite-pronoun trap is common: "each", "everyone", "either", "neither", and "one" are singular and take singular verbs, even when followed by a phrase like "of the players". The tense trap is the unjustified shift ("opened... sees"), fixed by making both verbs the same tense. For each item, identify the error type first, then look for the option that corrects exactly that, checking it does not break something else.
Choosing the clean correction
This dot point is the grammar-and-usage side of revising and editing, and it overlaps with the Language strand's conventions skills. The difference is context: here the error sits in a draft passage you are improving, which is how the EOC presents editing, and how you should treat your own draft when you proofread.
Editing a draft on an item
Try this
Q1. Why does "each" take a singular verb? [Recall]
- Cue. "Each" is a singular indefinite pronoun, so it takes a singular verb ("each has", not "each have"), even when followed by a plural phrase like "of the players". The phrase does not change the subject's number.
Q2. Edit this sentence and explain the fix: "Walking quickly, the homework was forgotten." [Short explanation]
- Cue. As written, the homework seems to be walking (a dangling modifier). Fix it by giving the modifier a logical subject: "Walking quickly, she forgot the homework." Now the person, not the homework, is walking, and the sentence is correct.
Exam-style practice questions
Practice questions written in the style of TDOE exam questions on this dot point, with worked answer explainers. The year tag is the paper they imitate, not the source.
TNReady English I (editing)1 marksEdit for the error: 'Each of the players have their own locker.' (1) no change; (2) Each of the players has their own locker; (3) Each of the players have his own locker; (4) Each of the player have their own locker.Show worked answer →
Answer: (2). "Each" is a singular indefinite pronoun, so it takes a singular verb: "has", not "have". The phrase "of the players" does not change the subject's number.
Why not the others: (1) keeps the error; (3) fixes the verb but introduces a gender problem and still mismatches; (4) "of the player" misreads the phrase and keeps "have". The best edit fixes the agreement error cleanly without adding a new one. (Note: some style guides accept singular "their"; the agreement fix here is the verb.)
TNReady English II (editing)1 marksEdit for the tense error: 'She opened the door and sees the surprise party.' (1) no change; (2) She opened the door and saw the surprise party; (3) She opens the door and saw the party; (4) She open the door and sees the party.Show worked answer →
Answer: (2). The sentence shifts from past ("opened") to present ("sees") for no reason. Editing makes the tense consistent: "opened... saw", both past.
Why not the others: (1) keeps the shift; (3) creates a new shift (present then past); (4) adds a subject-verb error ("She open"). The right edit makes the tense consistent without introducing a different error.
Related dot points
- Revising for clarity and organization: improving a draft passage by choosing the best transition, sequencing ideas logically, adding or deleting a sentence for unity and coherence, and sharpening a vague sentence, on a TNReady English I or II revising item, where the focus is the writing's effectiveness rather than its correctness.
How to revise a draft for clarity and organization on a TNReady English I or II item: choosing the best transition, sequencing ideas logically, adding or deleting a sentence for unity, and sharpening vague writing. Revising improves effectiveness, distinct from editing for correctness.
- Sentence boundaries and combining: recognizing and correcting fragments, run-ons, and comma splices, and combining short, choppy sentences into clearer, more varied ones using coordination, subordination, and appositives, on a TNReady English I or II revising and editing item, and in the essay.
How to fix sentence boundaries and combine sentences on a TNReady English I or II item: correcting fragments, run-ons, and comma splices, and combining choppy sentences with coordination, subordination, and appositives for clarity and variety. These choices also score the writing rubric.
- Word choice and precision: revising a draft to choose precise, appropriate words, replacing vague or general wording with specific terms, cutting wordiness and redundancy, matching word choice to a formal academic tone, and fixing commonly confused words, on a TNReady English I or II revising item, and in the essay.
How to revise word choice on a TNReady English I or II item: replacing vague wording with precise terms, cutting wordiness and redundancy, matching a formal academic tone, and fixing confused words. Precise word choice supports the writing rubric's Conventions and Clarity dimension.
- Revising and editing item types: how revising and editing questions are presented on the EOC (a draft passage with numbered or highlighted parts, asked through multiple-choice and technology-enhanced items), how to tell a revising question from an editing one, and how to read the stem and the draft efficiently, on a TNReady English I or II assessment.
How revising and editing questions are presented on the TNReady English I or II EOC: a draft passage with numbered or highlighted parts, asked through multiple-choice and technology-enhanced items. How to tell a revising question from an editing one and read efficiently.
- Grammar and usage conventions: applying the conventions of standard English that the EOC tests most often, including subject-verb agreement, pronoun-antecedent agreement and clear reference, consistent verb tense, and correct use of modifiers, on a TNReady English I or II editing item, and on the essay.
How to apply standard-English grammar and usage on TNReady English I or II editing items and the essay: subject-verb agreement, pronoun-antecedent agreement and clear reference, consistent verb tense, and correct modifiers. The conventions also score the writing rubric's third dimension.
Sources & how we know this
- TCAP English Language Arts — TDOE (2025)
- Tennessee Academic Standards for English Language Arts — TDOE (2025)